BREAD Website Copy Specs

BRED is a famously fun multi multi-award-winning brand known for it’s connection to its users’, I wanted to update the copy to convey this personality

With a tagline like “haircare basics, for not so basic hair”, I wanted to bring BREADS personality out in its copy.


Current Site Copy:

hair care basics for every hair type:

No more guessing. BRED makes high-quality ingredient driven haircare basics that work for everyone. Coily, wavy, curly, straight, BRED gets your hair wherever you want it to be.

Updated Spec Copy:

hair care basics for every hair type:

Stop the guessing game. Coily, cavy, curly, straight? BRED’s high-quality ingredient driven basics work for everyone. BRED gets your hair wherever you want it to be.


Current Copy:

Like lipgloss, but for your hair. hair-oil is a multi-use treatment + oil, for super glossy, hydrated strands.

WHAT IT DOES

  • ultra-shiny finishing touch to any hairstyle.

  • hydrates from within for visible hydration.

  • coats hair in fatty acids for inside-out repair.

Updated Spec Copy:

Want your strands as glossy as your pout? hair-oil is a multi-use treatment + oil, for high shine and hydrated hair.

WHAT IT DOES

  • ultra-shine finishing touch to any hairstyle.

  • hydrates from within for visible hydration.

  • coats hair in fatty acids for inside-out repair.


Current Copy:

it's the hair-gel you've been waiting for. perfect for achieving flexible, defined curls or slick back styles, hair-gel is a medium-to-strong hold, everyday botanical styling gel.

WHAT IT DOES

  • creates super defined, soft-touch curls with medium/strong hold.

  • works for slick-back styles, without the crunch.

  • botanical formula hydrates + repairs.

  • easy to use, wash-n-go styler.

Updated Spec Copy:

it's the hair-gel you've been waiting for. perfect for achieving flexible, defined curls or slick back styles, hair-gel is a medium-to-strong hold, everyday botanical styling gel.

WHAT IT DOES

  • creates super defined, soft-touch curls with medium/strong hold.

  • works for slick-back styles, without the crunch.

  • botanical formula hydrates + repairs.

  • easy to use, wash-n-go styler.

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